In My Mind

• Artist: x_eloquent_silence_x
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• Date: 07/22/2008
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In the mind of the untold
I feel so cold
Please someone release me
Please set me free
My head is hurting from the lies
They could fill the skies
I may wither away with every passing glance
Without Giving me a chance
With so much bottled up inside
I can't hide
It just grows in me
Like the life in the sea
Its like im cursed
Im soon gonna burst
Then it all will let go
and everyone will know
Whats in my mind
Whats on the inside.

Comments

[x_eloquent_silence_x]

Mind you it rhymes only really cuz i wrote this literally like 5 years ago...and thats really the only kind of poetry i knew then...soo...

[mkjhfd]

this one is great!
but u dont have to rhyme every two lines, it gets boring hearing the same sound twice and then another, twice...

[pinkpunk91]

omg thats how i feel all the time