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You've got my heartstrings
Tied firmly in knots.
Making my heart beat
Like a broken clock.
There's kindness in your eyes
Like I've never seen before.
And something in your comforting voice
Makes my ears scream for more.
You always seem to listen
To whatever nonsense that I say.
You answer all my questions
And you're on my mind all day.
Time always seems to slow
Whenever our eyes meet.
I believe it to be happiness
Sweeping me off my feet.
Compassion, love, understanding.
These are things I crave.
And all things you offer.
I see your face and start to rave.
God bless you for your sweet compassion.
Words that so ring true.
Not from my lips but another's,
Perfectly describe you.
- by Vampyre in the stars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: Euphamisms for Euphoria
- Artist: Vampyre in the stars
- Description: I wrote this poem a while back for my boyfriend. ^^
- Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: lovepoem
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sm00shed ba_Nana_s - 06/11/2009
- Ivana is right. The first two stanzas are nicely written, but then it all kinda mushes into the generic love poem
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- black_hearted_butterfly - 07/25/2008
- I love it! So sweet!
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- Atheshya - 07/22/2008
- You start off with some similie, with the promise of plenty of it later on, but then you... stop. It becomes another love poem like all the rest. Really, go with the metaphor and the imagery - you were on the right track there!
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- computercat5 - 07/22/2008
- It's beautiful. I bet he liked it.
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