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I hear the rains gone. And the silence tells me theres something wrong. I hate what I am but I should let it go, and in time this will all disapear as we watch it fade away, and you tell me you never cared. I know I have made mistakes, but you mean everything to me now.
And as the weather clears I finally find a way to see right threw you and this should have happened long ago, hopeing for a change of mind, but you say you rather be alone, and I agree, let’s take a breath, cause I try so hard to make this perfict. Truth is that I just dont know what I’m doing, I guess I am the one worth leaving.
- Title: One worth leaving
- Artist: killplz
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Description:
a little song i wrote. a little sad but idk, tell me what you think.
-Thnx for VOTING - Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: lyrics sadsong weather leaving
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Comments (3 Comments)
- skeletoncookiegurl - 12/27/2008
- I agree with the first girl. Seperate each lyric. Work on spelling. People really pay attention to that. Otherwise, It's got pretty good lyrics.
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- much ado about nothing - 12/22/2008
- Um you should fix the structure up, fix spelling and make it more into a poetry structure. Right now it's two paragraphs. When you look at lyrics are they like paragraphs? No. So change those and people will have an easier time reading.
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- Ueto Ara - 07/22/2008
- its soo nice!1 kawai!!
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