Souls United By War

• Artist: Amra Rose
• Description: this is a poem i wrote about the effects the war has on children...kids dont always understand why the united states is at war...i mean i still dont...
  
  so please comment and if possible offer feed back
• Date: 07/20/2008
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Two separate souls
In two different worlds
Are forced to grow up all to quickly
Because of the fools.

They are children united by war
Their lives are built on hate and fear
Not love and bravery

Thier blood boils in rage
They know not of wrongs commited
Yet they were raised to hate each other

These children did not choose this
It was forced upon them

They are:
The separate souls
United by war.

Comments

[calamito]

This is very good. Unlike many poems on this site, it has real meaning. I liked it. 5/5 for thought.

[Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind]

I love your poem, and the US is at war because Gearge W. Bush had a lapse of judgement and he can't swallow his pride enough to end it. Anyway, back to the poem: 5/5!