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Making tears flow down my pale face in mourn.
You left me I was only a child.
My mother's heart bleeds and screams out in scorn.
Father the memories of you aren't filed.
I wish you stayed to fill that file cabinet.
We could have had such great times together.
Well I guess destiny was set.
In my mind you are there, you are a good sir.
Even though you left me to shed cold tears.
I will love you no matter what mom says.
When I get older I'll find you there some were's.
Wish we met in my younger child days.
As long as I get to see you some day.
My heart will ease and I will be okay.
Written By, Joshua Seth Hogge
- Title: Son's only wish
- Artist: Evalad
- Description: this was one I did in an English project, but it turned out better then I though it would...I never had a father around, so this is a little note to him, werever he is...
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: sons only wish
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Evalad - 02/07/2009
- Aw thanks, and will do...
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- 2good2beforgoten - 01/14/2009
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I really like it! Its amazing when you start writing what can happen! Great job 5/5!
I'd love it, if you let me know what you think of my poetry or photos! thanks! - Report As Spam
- Clouds_Rebirth - 07/30/2008
- Kudos...
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- An Fear - 07/28/2008
- That's deep. 5/5
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