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Pain and Bliss forever blend,
Time expires and comes to rend,
Soul for Life always in trend,
Fight and Fight but never mend.
With flowers and prayers they will tend,
Into the Darkness they shall send,
Try and Try but never fend,
Death will claim but never end.
- by Goddess of Mercenaries |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Darkness
- Artist: Goddess of Mercenaries
- Description: My friend came up with the topic and I just wrote down what came to me.
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: darkness dark death
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Urine Pot the Hero - 07/20/2008
- This is really vague and generic. You might write a better poem with the aid of devices like - to name but one - IMAGERY.
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- elyphalant6 - 07/20/2008
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Lovely :3
This defeinantly cheers me up, not the topic but how it was written/typed.
I've seen some really bad poems today D: - Report As Spam
- Amra Rose - 07/20/2008
- wow good job...as others said you should expand it and make it longer...then publish it.... wink
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- Ellie Nash_x - 07/20/2008
- I like it, but it could be expanded a lot. Keep it up!
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- rosemidnight17 - 07/20/2008
- Interesting. depthfull. i really like it but a bit short for my taste! i would want to see more of your beautiful writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Mistress Skadi - 07/20/2008
- Cool. I like it alot.
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- Lady Ravynn - 07/20/2008
- It's really nice, but shouldn't the title be Death instead of Darkness???
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