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My mind is fixed
On thoughts of you
All the things you do
You wont come out of my head
Your like a sickness
That I just can't shake
A virus
That won't go away
Why do I love you so?
Why do I care about you so much?
Why do I worry about you?
Why does my heart act this way?
Its unexplainable
Its undeniable
Its unchangeable
Its unreal
Its a feeling
That wont go away
That I cant stop
That just wont end
This feeling
I never want it to end
This feeling
Is true love
- by XxSoundless ScreamsxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Thoughts Of You
- Artist: XxSoundless ScreamsxX
- Description: I wrote this poem while thinking about my boyfriend one night....and also...if you would like to use my work...please give me credit for it...
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: feelings love thoughts
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Comments (5 Comments)
- queffers10 - 07/20/2008
- very good, even if i feel the opposite about my bf
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- sexey tiney - 07/20/2008
- very expresive. not as good as the one about jesus and all. quite simple but yet in a way its somthing i which people can respect what youre sayin. just amazing.
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- DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj - 07/20/2008
- now this is writing this is so AMAZING!!!!!!!! this is wat i am talking about this is the writing tat is better than the frist 1 and it is better and not gross!!!!!!! nice no it is beautiful work!!!!
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- studdastep - 07/20/2008
- you're a little bit obsessive, aren't you? Seriously, i did like it. 4/5
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- rosemidnight17 - 07/20/2008
- I really enjoyed it. I really like the un- words. they added color to the poem making it different. keep up the good work!
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