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Give me a break, what can I do?
I'm quiet; you're quiet, too.
Shouldn't we talk, spread the trust around?
Or maybe you like watching as I fall to the ground.
On bended knee I beg, open up to me.
Tell me the truth, help me to see.
Be real or be wrong - lies never last long.
Communication's never been my strong point - you have to bring it out in me.
Help me find the truth - I lie so easily.
You are my - don't let me fall.
But I am my own person, not your pretty dress-up doll.
We'd be perfectly together if we'd just open up.
Right now, we're too likely to scream, erupt.
You know me too well and then not at all.
You always want to talk but you never seem to call.
What do you want from me, what can I do?
I'm so scared of losing this, of losing you.
You are to perfect, your flaws beautiful.
Why do you want me, a person so dull.
- by lady P A II N__xx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: I Need A Break
- Artist: lady P A II N__xx
- Description: I wrote this while my ex and I were going through a rough patch... at least it was rough on my side. I don't know how he felt about my silences. I never showed it to him, but it might have helped. Constructive criticism only, please.
- Date: 07/18/2008
- Tags: breakup communication doll flaws
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Comments (1 Comments)
- bushido399 - 01/02/2009
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I'm a musician, and I like to think that I'm good, and I absolutely LOVE this piece. It's phenomenal. I'm truly sorry about what happened, and I can totally relate.
May I use these lyrics in a song, potentially?
Hmmm... Constructive criticism.
Second to last line.
"You are to perfect, your flaws so beautiful."
Extra "o" on to.
XD
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