why

• Artist: ddjr5
• Description: this is about when I was stuck in a hospital I hope u like it
• Date: 07/18/2008
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It was that place that made me sick,
It was that place that made me cry,
It was that place that made me confused,
It was that place that made me wonder why?

My time in it made me weak,
My time in it made me strong,
My time in it made me hate my home,
My time in it made me wonder how much more long?

I dont understand how it happened,
I dont understand why god choose me,
To live with a curse that others call disease,
To this sky that we yell,

Why do I live in this life,
Why me,
Why so young,
WHY?WHY?WHY?

so you shorten my life,
By years and decades,
why should I die young to shorten a popularity,
that is as great as that wall in China?

So do you like me as a child,
Or do you want me as a slave,
To spread your word,
as if you are a king and I am a naive?

so the younger I live,
the longer this world grows,
so the good people die,
and the bad people dont care or know.

So you choose me,
So you choose a child,
So that people can tease and laugh,
My heart feels spicy and mild.

So do what you do,
And say what you say,
I dont care what you beleive,
All I have to say,

Im done living.
Im done crying,
Im done sinning,
And Im done crying.

THE END

Comments

[Naruto3672]

its preety good i can understand what you mean actually and you put alot of feeling into it i say if i could id giva a 9 but i cant so 5/5

[ninja-kyoko-chan]

its good
i like how you described what it feels like to be chosen as the one to suffer, even though the other people out there, still living their lives have no idea

[MyfriendsareDohnuts]

You sad crying twice in the same verse, and you also spelt believe wrong. Some parts I don't understand, but some parts I do, half half for me you did really well in verses 5 and 7. A little more work on the others and I would have given it one more star. My rating will be 3.