City Dreams

• Artist: Chronicle Pig
• Description: I wrote this one night when I was trying to sleep but I couldnt keep my mind from going all over the place, which then I heard the sirens and people yelling outside, giving me the inspiration to write.
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: sounds sleep streets

We’re falling asleep to the sounds, the music the street cars give off to us-
Feeling the rain on the ground, piercing your body and through your mind-
Wishing the sirens would go; you want to get away from this place-
I can’t hold your hand as we live; life would just be too unfair to pass it by-
Hearts on the highest point of the world, too afraid to live, more afraid to jump-
Invisible sadness creeping up behind passion, no more concern, the fall has begun-

Comments

[deactivated-28347834753]

It's nice, but the hyphens' meaning is lost. I know what you were trying to do, but it didn't work. I'd say that you should expand on the whole siren thing. Nice, though.

[Kishite_no_Mirror]

Beautiful chain of thought writing.