My Dream

• Artist: jirohbomb
• Description: A poem I wrote that describes what I am going to do with my rapping/rhyming skills ,bu very vaguely.
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: dreams cool poetry

School is over,
Time to be,
A happy soul,
That can sing,
To the public,
Without a fear,
Or being scared,
Like a deer.
This is my dream,
That's why I rhyme,
Since I know this will help me in time.

Comments

[ekitten614]

I think it's really cool! It rhymes nicely and captures how it's always harder to be yourself at school. Awesome!

[The God Bot 4000]

This isn't great.
It's not very deep...
1/5
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[setuptour]

i love it check out mine tags:texascity