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Winter Simplicity.
sand dollar raindrops stretch in the cold
out with the sane and in with the old
glass beads on branches steam as they fall
branches on mirrors, cracks in the wall
keystone arches with translucent teeth
bicycle stokes with an icicle wreath
fire on white has an unpleasant bite
she catches her fill in the dwindling light
brindle-boy plumage in well-measured hoots
sleepy and warm in the thick willow roots
tinder will echo on well-traveled paths
carried on leaves while the woodpecker laughs.
- by -dangerous daisies- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Winter Simplicity.
- Artist: -dangerous daisies-
- Description: Written one peaceful morning in February.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: wintersimplicity
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Qaisar Domino - 01/27/2009
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I love this poem! I really do^^ It is one of the best poems i've read on Gaia!
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- Wicker Chair - 01/03/2009
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the rhyme and meter is positively flawless
and beyond that it's just a splendid image
i mean, i'm jealous. 5/5 man
good work - Report As Spam
- -dangerous daisies- - 07/17/2008
- I wrote it in February, however it doesn't take place in February.
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- Yixingie - 07/17/2008
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eh?..this is a couplet without skipping line. It has a wonderful description, good job!^__^
btw, how is it winter simplicity when it's in February? - Report As Spam
- Purple Symphony - 07/17/2008
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It could be better I wont lie about that.
However I think it is wonderful. 4/5 - Report As Spam
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