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Kara in Analogue
Against the almighty grain,
we abstain from anything actual, but
in all actuality, amazing things arrest all.
Beatniks breeze by, brewing berated banter,
brimming brownstones, blurbs, blogs,
containing nothing like the clever canter.
Don't dog downtrodden degenerates, disarming
everything is everything, marked in everlasting
eggshell,
easing everglades worth of everlasting empire-swell.
Forget forbidden passages, passing forsaken
fruit, forfeiting flag football, for fathers
forgoing fine futures.
God loves god-willing, go getters
that get graceful,
gleaming glory by the plateful,
while the heathens heat debates of
haunted holidays by the hate-full.
Ignoring inevitable irony illustrates
irate inane idiots,
justifying jugheads juggling disjointed
Jezebels and false Patriots.
Klan members don't get kites stuck
in such mental strings,
lingering, languishing, laughing about
the words between.
Morning makes mad mothers
duck beneath the covers,
no naked Neophyte nipping,
never nay-saying another.
Otherwise outdated outsiders
can catch a foothold,
possibly paralyzing people
perfecting parenthood.
Question my motives,
quantify all of my queries,
resign rhetoric, rightfully,
righteously render me ridiculous,
silently slithering, slaking, stating
my hand in all that's set before us.
Take me to the tarmac, tied down,
tested, and true.
Underneath umbrellas, undone, and unglued.
Verily, I wait for valediction
from a vocal, vexed, verbose,
vox-populi, vehement
about my most certain demise.
Without worry, we wait,
wanting wordsmiths war-bound,
x-ing out the failures,
yet yacking yards of young-truth.
Zeroing in on a zenith, wide and clean,
while I scream your name
atop this rusted mezzanine.
- by Zero is an Integer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Kara in Analogue
- Artist: Zero is an Integer
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Description:
Written purely in alliteration, from A-Z. This is not a poem for those of you with short vocabularies, or a small sense of how the world actually works.
This description might hurt me in terms of people coming in, but at least I'll get intelligible feedback and honest reviews from those that do.
That being said, get y'alls asses the hell on in here. - Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- TheAmberShrew - 10/05/2009
- My favorite, and the most memorable, thing you've done.
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- ElectraShocked - 08/01/2009
- wow, really good.I agree with astaire though, some of the alliteration seems a bit forced....
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- Zero is an Integer - 07/24/2008
- HEY!!!
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- Lazarus Too - 07/18/2008
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I loved it. The point of view takes nothing away from the points made as most poems do and you remain fully realistic. Well done!!
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- Zero is an Integer - 07/18/2008
- Aww...Thank you guys for showing up. It was worth the criticism, alone.
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- Astaire - 07/17/2008
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Definitely an interesting form, and one I am tempted to try sometime in the near future.
Some of the alliteration seems a bit forced, but I think you definitely made it interesting and worth the read. heart - Report As Spam
- arddunaid - 07/17/2008
- The alliteration increased the readability, but not the intelligibility. A better piece when spoken. All in all, way, way better than avg. gaia-quality.
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