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Watching you
Watch me
Watch you...
The violent trials of life
the harsh conditions that are to
follow and breath every by.
They follow my soul
they latch on
and cling to the veins of fate.
Tearing away at my very existence
crushing my hope
feeding on my sanity...
You
Its you and only you
that can force me to forget
Steal it away
if not for a moment
that you manage to stretch on and flow through
the dark folds that carry hidden manipulation
and cheat time.
You make an unbearable life
worthy of living.
I love knowing that I am your world
when you are mine as well.
I love feeling
you feel
what you feel
when you touch me
hold me
kiss me.
I love you
I ******** Love you
everything about you
You said to live without love
is to live without no reason at all.
Words spoken with reason.
Words spoken by you.
I love you.
End of story
bottom line
all that ever mattered...
This is dedicated to my love...David Joseph Michall.
I will love you till the end of time
And beyond this world I will be at wait.
Forever to you...
I love...
- by M0shing Cigarettes |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: You claimed me
- Artist: M0shing Cigarettes
- Description: Because I love him.
- Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (1 Comments)
- charlotte_loves - 01/02/2009
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Um,Its deep of course. But,Its not that good. I do give you effort,grammer! :] You can really go somewhere with this poem. just like the words Watching you
Watch me
Watch you...
The violent trials of life
the harsh conditions that are to
follow and breath every by
You don't need the watch you... Part,It shouldn't be in there.And If you putted 'the harsh conditions that are harsh to' you should had added an you. so it'll be 'the harsh conditions to you.' But,you did a good job ^_^ 4.5 - Report As Spam