Love,...Love?

• Artist: Shadow_Wolf108
• Description: I wrote this its about my 1st gf,..I did better then this but i thought my 1st poem should be the 1st on here
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love

I still can't believe it,...
that this day was it
when I met you,..
I was asked by you
If I wanted to be,...
your boyfriend, me!
I was shocked at those words
I was speachless when I heard the words
What do i say,...
I didn't know what to say...
At that moment I felt something new.
Was it the words said by you?
is this a dream?
No, but that mean,...
This is true
me, and you.

Comments

[ninjasoccer_chick27]

it was good, but it felt almost, empty

[Marionette_Mentation]

uhh.. i think this is a little cheezy! it's good but a little weird. i felt it was simple and to the point but it was lacking the tingly feeling that you would get when someone does ask you out. i didn't feel i just read it. comment bck plz ^.^

[Snoozbie]

That's so sweet. <3