Loveless For Eternity

• Artist: brokenbarrier
• Description: Such a poem for someone who will ignore me and only has eyes for someone else... Do you think it stupid that I still care for him either way?
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: loveless

Those in love and romance
Must be on their Cloud Nine.
So what is this sad dance
That parts me from divine?

The heart of mine closed off.
You who see someone else.
The sight of your smile, soft,
And my cold heart melts.

But you never see me.
Not even the tears shed.
Time's loveless eternity
Has broken my heart red.

Comments

[momo the momi]

Aw - this is so bittersweet! You want them to be happy, but at the same time, you want to be be happy, too (with them). So sad - 4/5

[Yukira_Kuchiki]

No not really, I believe that if you really care about someone then you should what ever it takes to make them happy, even if your not the one making them happy by their side, either you did a wonderful job. I give you 5 out of 5

[Aqua Haku]

So sad to be ignored isn't.I kind of understand.I give this a five one for each tear that fell of my cheek.Well..I couldn't rate higher. X_X There were 7.

[II x K A N A x II]

yipee! very good job on the poem barrier-chan! very......deep 0_0
*applause to you*

[snowyjoe]

true love is unconditional
even if they dont love you back
i agree
but it still hurts more than anything