Closer song Into a poem Maybe.

• Artist: x__Ashaalay
• Description: The song closer with Parts of the lyrics but made into a Poem a bit,.
  I gess its a rhyming poem.The beat is exactly like Closer by ne-yo. So try singing it ;P Only the beginning is the closer part then i go.This story is true. My girl was in a accident.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: poemlovecloser

And I just can't pull myself away. until that day I say "Come closer" Til you meant that love was shinin' high.You run away and say Buh bye Buh byebuh bye. Is it you is it me?Go on change the beat.C'mon girl and take a seat.With the heart that changes shapes. I rewind that same o'l tape.That you were meant to be until that day we had to see.We were not meant to be.Cuz of the hurricane that came and stopped us.It was insane.That we fell into heaven.I felt like they're was Seven of you.baby it came true when i called you my "Boo".
I tilted up to the Stars saw a whishing star fly through my car.Then a flashing light right through the doors.An ambulance swooshing right by me.I ran and came to see that you were dead or Hurt

Comments

[x__Ashaalay]

Thnx!

[demon strait outta_hell]

smile It seems well thought out, yet highly emotional. Emotion is a good substance to pour unto any form of writing, truly.5/5

[Ryan Russell]

I'm not sure what to think about this one. It seems like a mad scramble of thoughts thrown together, and yet they all revolve around the same topic. I do wish it was a little more sequential though-the "it was insane" does not sit well with me and seems totally out of place in the poem.