Do thou love a slayer of heart

• Artist: Lumnous
• Description: This is a poem I made 2 years ago
  I do not want anyone to use it without my permission
  If you do wish to use my poem please PM me and I will decide its fate onto you
  
  This poem is copyrighted to me only so far
  
  Please comment on what you think about this and the question it asks you
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: lumnous wolfenheart love tainted deep

Do thou love a slayer of heart

Do thou love a slayer of heart
If thou does slay others ?
What is love until you feel it

Love
Love is unknown
No one can understand the true meaning of love
Until thou can feel love
Thoust cannot tell the true meaning until that time comes

Although love is supposed to be pure
My love is tainted as such is it poision in my heart
It is a feling of knives in the back
If my love is tainted I have one question for you to think about



How can I love her ?

Poem Made By Lumnous WolfenHeart
Copyright 2008 ©

Comments

[Lumnous]

thanks ive done it with spell check and the thoust i cant change which im upset about but i know now its supposed to be thous and i know how to spell poison now

[Shadow.Of.Venca]

I agree. This is an excellent piece of work. The only thing you need is a polish with spell check, and you'd have a perfect work of art. 5 stars.

[Lumnous]

Thankyou very much ^^

[Eirika]

This has got to be one of the most brilliant pieces I've seen on the writing arena thus far. Only critique is you may want to fix the typos with a simple spell check. Beyond that, it is amazing. 5 stars.