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Verse 1:
When I first laid my eyes on you
I was absolutely stunned
I couldn't breathe, I couldn't think
What were you thinking of?
Everything about you takes my breath away
Chorus:
I know that you see me
And you hear me, too
You try to pay attention
But sometimes I see through
You're eyes; they're like glass
When you walk down the street
With me hand-in-hand
Everything's alright, everything's okay
You are so perfect
What more can I say?
Verse 2:
There was just something about you
When you first said my name
That made me forget
What I was about to say
Everything about you takes me breath away
Chorus:
I know that you see me
And you hear me, too
You try to pay attention
But sometimes I see through
You're eyes; they're like glass
When you walk down the street
With me hand-in-hand
Everything's alright, everything's okay
You are so perfect
What more can I say?
Bridge:
Why do you have to act like I'm not here?
Why do you always have to whisper in my ear?
Why do you have this affect on me?
You're everything that I wish I could be
Chorus:
I know that you see me
And you hear me, too
You try to pay attention
But sometimes I see through
You're eyes; they're like glass
When you walk down the street
With me hand-in-hand
Everything's alright, everything's okay
You are so perfect
What more can I say?
End:
La, la, la, la
La, la, la, la
La, la, la, la, la, la
- by MakaelaDylan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Why Is All I Ask
- Artist: MakaelaDylan
- Description: This is a song I made up. It's just about a girl who fell in love with the perfect boy and she's basically at a loss for words when she's around him because he's amazing but he doesn't pay much attention to her. I'm sorry if it's cheesy because I'm not a very good lyric writer, but I wanted to see what people thought of it. And remember, not all songs have to rhyme. Most songs don't. This one doesn't most of the time but sometimes it does. Enjoy.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: rockstarkaela lyrics song
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Tibix - 07/16/2008
- its well done
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/16/2008
- well...you could get a job writing for some C class emo band like f** Out Boy
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- ekitten614 - 07/16/2008
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Aw, it wasn't too cheezy! It's really good! I especially like the line "You're eyes; they're like glass" Great job!
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- Ronmaru3502 - 07/16/2008
- I personally enjoyed it. So I hate to say this but verse 2 last line I saw a typo. "me breath away" to "my breath away". Good song.
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