Blood Letters

• Artist: Tatsu-Chi
• Description: I wrote this a few years back now when i was feeling real low and lonely
  I have plans to eventually turn it into a song...
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: blood pain suffering

Hand me a knife
I'll draw it swift across the vein
Hand me a gun
I'll put a bullet in my brain

I'm in a world of torture
I need to find release
As soon as my blood starts to run
Only then will i find peace

I need to feel it run from me
Watch it pooling on the floor
Tho i may lie there dying
I'm not hurting anymore

I give one last cry
A last breath from blood drained lips
That scarlet fluid freedom
The last drop falls from lifeless finger tips

Comments

[OverlordLunacy]

Very pretty. I can relate easily. Keep writing. 5 stars.

[xxX3mo HeartedXxx]

wow this poem is amazing i cant explain wat i felt when i read it and i know even if some one says they understand they dont they may hav gone through a lot of stuff but itll never help u and wat ur feeling

[sarasahira]

sweet

[v_ballchic8]

I love it. I know how you felt, I went through it not too long ago. I'm still dealing with the aftershocks of the pain. The piece is written very well, and for those that have been there, the pain is described perfectly. The word choice is perfect, the phrasing is amazing. Excellent job. 5/5