Until I Die

• Artist: tootrexxx
• Description: I love looking at the sun setting and rising. The sun was my inspiration in this poem. Most of my poems are about nature because I find nature fasinating. I hope you find that you do to after you read this poem.*smile*
• Date: 06/22/2009
• Tags: nature

As the sun comes up,
My heart begins to sink,
Melting in with the morning sky,
I feel as if this day will never end though it has just begun,
I dont know how i feel for my memory has gone numb,
Mystified by the suns beauty and stregth,
I cant take my eyes away from its glory,
Evreyday until i die i promise to look at the sun in the sky.
To let it refresh my skin and fill my heart with its rays of light,
So maybe someday I'll shine just as bright.

Comments

[Otmo Shank]

I like it. I also like that it's not about emo suicide relationship depression like everything else on here.

Could use some spelling/grammar correction, but is otherwise good.

[Aillo May]

I like it