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Hello? Hello? Is anybody there?
Is there anybody who will help me?
Help! Help! I need you!
Why? Why won’t you answer me?
Did I do something wrong?
Help! Help! Answer me! Please!
I’m shattering… breaking…
- by Nami Kiasu |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/07/2009 |
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- Title: a call for help
- Artist: Nami Kiasu
- Description: yah... you no what, i don't know why i did this. but really, do i have to have a reason? anywayz... please comment and rate! dont be mean, i already know im the worst poet ever... lol
- Date: 05/07/2009
- Tags: call help namikiasu random
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Cherrikoi - 05/14/2010
- It's not that bad of a piece.
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- Pretty Kitty Face - 03/23/2010
- VERY NICE!
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- aacatone - 02/15/2010
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Very very very very very nice.
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- 99rukia99 - 02/02/2010
- wow. i feel like tht ALOT. i feel the pain u endure and not all scars show and not all wounds heal...but remember, u just gotta deal wit ur lifee.
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- mirachan3 - 01/02/2010
- I like it. It's short, keeps you wondering, but let's you decide how to interpret it. It give the reader a sense of being able to put it to any situation they need help with or feel is to much. I like it. And your not a bad poet, poetry in my opinion is constantly changing. Poetry has no boundry lines really. It's very subjective and is really about feelings, emotions, and messages. And is usually highly personal. 5/5
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- mmmeglet - 12/12/2009
- You are not a bad poet. I love it! If you think it is bad I would just add a few more lines... that is what I do when I don't like my poems.
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- xXLeiko_TsukikoXx - 11/30/2009
- hehe good job sounds like me and my best friend joking around lol
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