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The depths of the Ocean Blue are nothing compared to you.
I dive in deep and everything is so wide and vast.
The greens and blues of your eyes compared to the sea contrast.
I feel like I'm drowning in your own personal ocean.
I need to swim away but can't, I'm lost in the motion.
It feels like the end, and now the waves begin to descend.
The waves take me under, they send me below.
I'm thrusted down to the bottom of Davey Jones locker.
The lightning in the sky makes the whole ocean glow.
I'm still held down, I'm starting to choke.
My obtaining air in time is nothing but a joke.
I'm drowning at the bottom for centuries to seconcds, I don't know.
But then the tides part, and I'm freed from it's grip.
The ocean throws me out and I'm on land again.
I'm not sure what happened, for how long or even when.
I stare at your ocean and am not sure if the rage lives on.
Now I live by that ocean and I can't remain calm.
As I stand by that ocean and still float adrift,
I know life will take me where ever it is.
- by Alibis of the Heart |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: His Ocean
- Artist: Alibis of the Heart
- Description: It's about one of my friends. He likes to ignore people a lot, and it can go on for months at any given time, for no specific reason. I never really get why, so I wrote this to kind of explain how it feels...
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: ocean
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Holy Edward Cullen - 12/07/2008
- Awesome, I get how you feel, I have friend like this and sometimes he just holds a grudge and I don't know why and it makes me fell really guilty because I don't know what I have done wrong
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- Galindafied1 - 12/07/2008
- I liked it. But, the second stanza lost me on the rhythm. It lost the rhyme scheme all together. However, imagery is good and symbolism is nice. Very pleasant poem. I give four stars. XD
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- rocksan11 - 12/07/2008
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this was great awsome you are very talented
mabey if you want to we could become friend its up to you
the word chose let alone broke the surfface it was a deep and meaning full peom great work - Report As Spam
- Holds Devils Pot of Tea - 12/02/2008
- I think this is the best.Your really deep and youve great potential i really hope you keep it up(yes i know ive said that alot)The metaphors are great and so is the emotion and deep-ness of them.
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- Saturn Midnight - 11/30/2008
- I'm with OuEstLaCraie. Very nice.
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- OuEstLaCraie - 11/30/2008
- I like the metaphor of this one, drowning in an ocean vs drowning in emotion...well done : ]
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