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The Last Fight
Her world crumbling down
her heart dropped and stomped to the ground
his eyes so cold as he looks at her
like ice piercing straight through her
the demon has woken inside of him
roaring like a beast claws as sharp as nails
clawing through her flesh
grasping at her soul skin on fire body tired
she crawls into a dark hole
curls up in a ball as the tears begin to fall
looking now at the damage he had done
now he felt like total scum
crawling into the hole
what he had done tugging at his soul
apologizing for all the wrong he did to her
he told her he loved her then a brief silence
she smiled and he then smiled back
as she told him "I love you too but..." her
eyes then grew cold "we're done "
as she then pulled the trigger of the gun
- by Tala Defenrir |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: The Last Fight
- Artist: Tala Defenrir
- Description: Well it pretty much speaks for it self how I felt , but I always wanted to write something where the ending isn't quite clear. where the reader had to choose which way it was meant. Tell me what ya think.
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: last fight
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Comments (1 Comments)
- imJerel - 11/26/2008
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wow this so beautiful..
its perfect i always wanted to find a writer who could tell me
what i want too know or say or end..its awesome!
5 stars!
rate mine too! TQ! - Report As Spam