Interpreting the Tears

• Artist: kryptic_valiance
• Description: An amateur poem by me.
  I was feeling really bad so I decided to make a poem to touch everyone else's hearts and inspire a change in the world, starting with Gaia.
  I guess it's dedicated to all the people who have experinced or is experiencing suffering. Like the victims of 9/11 and Virginia Tech and Columbine or Katrina, the earthquake in China, and all other tragedies.
• Date: 10/06/2008
• Tags: tears sadness interpret thought message

Tears

When one is struck with a feeling of digrace,
Or is facing one of their worst fears,
They convey an emotion which runs down their face,
In the form of dismal tears.

Tears can express your sadness,
Tears can express your pain,
Tears can express your madness,
Your suffering, your shame.

Tears can mean your pity,
Tears can mean your woe,
Tears can mean your misery,
Your sorrow, and no hope.

Tears represent your depression,
Tears represent your unhappiness,
Tears represent your oppression,
Your anguish and your gloominess.

Tears have other interpretations,
But listen to what I say,
Get up and abandon your desolation,
And wipe those tears away.

Comments

[dattebayo personified]

its better than the 'tears' poem i made!!!
[it is...!]

[Scruffy_dog02]

Very amazing~ Deep and thoughtful, i lik those poems the best ^^ good job~ <3

[Winks191]

very nice

[La Petite Mofette]

I like how the repetition with the word tears gives it a rhythmic feel, I the first verse could use a little more rhythm like the rest of the poem but it still deserves a 5/5