civilization

• Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
• Description: it is dispicable what is happening to America. they silence those that speak, cut the legs of those that run, and burn bridges between all that wish for connection. some how, though, patriots still exist and this utterly astounds me. DONT NOT BELIEVE THE HYPE! this is my soon 2 be single off my up coming album.
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: civilized song bush hate rage

Artificial selection!
they're aborting us for protection
inexcusable insurection
there's a price to pay for your transgressions!

Chorus:
THERE'S NO EXCUSE!
there is no use
for patiots any more!
SO HEAR THE HYPE!
and save the tripe
and lead them to the lie~(i thrive you cry)~CIVILIZED!

Dogmatic!
contained but erratic
fantastic
miscalculations
Effervecent!
so unpleasent
Incanddecent!
learn your lesson!

Chorus:
THERE'S NO EXCUSE!
there is no use
for patiots any more!
SO HEAR THE HYPE!
and save the tripe
and lead them to the lie~(i thrive you cry)~CIVILIZED!

Interlude:
Be afraid of the rape in society!
Be afraid of the rape in society!
Be afraid of the rape in society!
BE AFRAID OF THE RAPE IN SOCIETY!
Whats so civil bout civilization?
Whats so civil bout civilization?
Whats so civil bout civilization?
WHAT'S SO CIVIL BOUT CIVILIZATION!?

Chorus:
THERE'S NO EXCUSE!
there is no use
for patiots any more!
SO HEAR THE HYPE!
and save the tripe
and lead them to the lie~(i thrive you cry)~CIVILIZED!

Opposite t the position of your decision
we are not fit to live in this condition
dispite your attempts, we're all still alive
I am a drone, WELCOME TO THE HIVE!
We exist souly to contridict you
and though our methods are impromptu
we have our own agenda to fufill
in the end, you'll BOW DOWN TO OUR WILL!

CIVILIZED!
why are we so CIVILIZED!?
stop being so damn CIVILIZED!
WE'LL NEVER DIE!

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

...any1 else

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

well, it isnt exactly poetry. it's a lot better with music I assure u. this is intended for lyrics, not poetry. and to kitten, im too freakin lazy to check my spelling. u understand what it means so be quiet.and every word has a meaning. it is an implied meaning rather than bluntly stated. that's my style of writing.

[HUMIDIFIER]

you're using words that don't fit and have no meaning in the context. LOOK A BIG WORD doesn't fly with me, at all. spendng the five minutes on looking for spelling errors wouldn't hurt, either. i'm not sure how this would work as a song, but that's yet to be determined.

[Atheshya]

Seems more like an angry rant to me than anything. This would work well for a song (which you say it is), but just as poetry... One of the good things I can find about this is the rhyming, which is nice and unforced for the most part. The biggest problem here is that, again, it's just an angry rant. Nothing very poetic about that.

[twilight_pryncess_bella]

deep...really deep