a crush nothing more

• Artist: strawbarrie
• Description: You know, that one sided love you went through for that one guy into words.
• Date: 11/19/2008
• Tags: crush

Why can't you notice me?
Am I invisible?
Others find me alluring, appealing
But they are not you
They don't have you sense of humor or your looks, much less your personality
There are so much of you that I think I would love
I want you to notice me
To talk to me
I want to understand you and you me
I will never be pretty enough or smart enough or fast enough for you
So I will forget you
You are only a dream from yesterday nothing more

Comments

[RiikoxSoushi]

I can really relate to this, great job, I could feel the emotion behind the words, 5/5 :3

[smol might]

pwettiful 3nodding

[itaru watanabe]

amazing....others have told me i write poetry exactly like this...and now i see why...you are accordingly at my level...read my journal entry blood v2,and you'll see why

[Lotterynote]

So true. I just wish all boys could read this and see how we feel. Maybe someday they'll understand, but it'll be too late for them. 5/5

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

i like this i understand ur pain i liked this guy who doesnt even know i exist so i just say hey wat is up with u never talking or noticing me but now we r best friends.... sorta

[IBlue-AliceI]

I totally understand...but hey cheer up. There's a song called Gotta be Somebody by Nickleback, LISTEN TO IT! But anyway good job!