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Hello? Hello? Is anybody there?
Is there anybody who will help me?
Help! Help! I need you!
Why? Why won’t you answer me?
Did I do something wrong?
Help! Help! Answer me! Please!
I’m shattering… breaking…
- by Nami Kiasu |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/07/2009 |
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- Title: a call for help
- Artist: Nami Kiasu
- Description: yah... you no what, i don't know why i did this. but really, do i have to have a reason? anywayz... please comment and rate! dont be mean, i already know im the worst poet ever... lol
- Date: 05/07/2009
- Tags: call help namikiasu random
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ColthurstGirls on Youtube - 08/27/2009
- Excuse me cuti3baby96 -, first of all you're name is more than likely a lie, second do you happen to be talking about yourself?
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- xXKelandryXx - 08/26/2009
- nope you never need a reason for a poem unless you want a reason for it
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- Sabaism - 08/22/2009
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its okay, but its the kind of poetry that only other poets would truly appreciate.
im not a poet, so 3/5 - Report As Spam
- Mary sotelo - 08/15/2009
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you are a very good poet
i really liked it one of the best i have read - Report As Spam
- swarrior10 - 07/27/2009
- Very good writing it was very well written i can imagine this.So if i can imagine things when i read it that tells people that they did a great job.
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- -x-Echo-x- the fallen - 07/25/2009
- I don't understand how people can be so bored with there unimportant live that they have to insult everyone about not being perfect. You're peom isn't the best thing to grace the planet but it wasn't terrible either. Don't listen to them they are total morons anyway.
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- Iconic Nightmare - 07/22/2009
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Very nice. It's creative and actually sort of involves the reader. Felt like I was there hearing the cries for help.
5/5 - Report As Spam