Life as a Nobody

• Artist: tHe PuPpEt MaStEr toshi
• Description: this is a story that I wrote about two months a go. i got inspired when i was going to bed. i hope you enjoy!
• Date: 09/28/2008
• Tags: life nobody

>>There was once a little girl that always sat in the corner,
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>>didn't speak unless spoken,
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>>always sitting with a beat up stuffed koala bear
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>>at her home she a twin brother and an older sister
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>>her mother was always playing with her twin brother and scolding her older sister
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>>and her father was always saying her older sister was born lucky
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>>and telling her twin brother that he was lucky to be born
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>>but the little girl, she didn't get praised or scolded
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>>she was always forgotten
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>>the only person who noticed her was her cousin
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>>he always made her happy when he came by because he made her feel important
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>>but one day he told the little girl that he was going off to war
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>>the little girl was sad, but her cousin gave her a stuffed koala bear
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>>so she can remember him while he was away
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>>he said that if she talked to the bear he might be able to here talking
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>>so he left and the little girl talked to the bear everyday
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>>telling it what happening in her daily life
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>>then one day her family got news that her cousin got killed
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>>when his car was bombed
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>>the little girl was devestated
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>>her only friend, the only person who cared about what happened to her
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>>she now had no reason to live
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>>but what she still had her stuffed koala bear
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>>the little girl grew up talking to her only friend, the koala bear
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>>but then on one unfaithful day she woke up
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>>to find her koala bear missing
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>>she looked and she looked but it wasn't in her room
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>>she went downstairs and found her bear burning in the fireplace
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>>her older sister burned it as a cruel prank
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>>the little girl, now 16 has no one to talk to
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>>not even the bear her cousin gave her
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>>she now truly doesn't have a reason to live
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>>she locks her self up in her room for days
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>>when her mother finally noticed she hasn't been out of her room
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>>she knocks on the door and realized the door was unlocked
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>>she opened it to find her daughter sitting a pool of blood
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>>she ran to help her but it was to late
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>>the little girl that grew up alone
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>>died alone

Comments

[Procer Nex]

I find it comical that people seem to believe that prose and poetry seem to have some sort of difference. An excellent poem is one that is able to tell a story. Poetry doesn't have to jump up and down and say "I rhyme! I'm a poem!" because that's not what all poems do. Read "The Iliad" and tell me it's not a poem and that it's prose. Then tell me why it's called an "Epic Poem." I liked it. Thanks for sharing.

[Kuro Fukai]

It is more of a story then a poem.
Don't get me wrong, I liked it
I just think it's in the wrong place is all

[marushi1]

I liked it good job

[kingmufasa]

um it was good an comment below how bout we use proper english not dat

[MUSIC_IS_FOR3V3R]

it was good & sad...but dats wasnt poetry

[xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx]

i like it.

[Nuhaix]

why do people write these stories u just want to make us sadder as we live