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Time stretches on and on
It's been so long.
Time stretches on and on...
Where have you been?
What's taken so long?
I feel like inside I should be in pain.
Yet my heart feels like a void.
So empty and plain.
Where has the beat gone to?
Why can't I feel it anymore?
Am I dead inside?
Or is this the way I was born?
Was I never supposed to feel the emotion.
This forbidden love that causes commotion.
Have my past actions finally caught up with me?
The real reason why I should be in agony.
Or is it because no one shares their feelings?
The reason why loneliness was so appealing.
I was always so content with living by myself.
Yet when we met I couldn't think about anything else.
How could I live with myself from then on?
When my heart always seemed to be beat like a gong.
Together we made everything seem like a party.
We could talk about anything whether it was clean or naughty.
Even in darkness we could make each other laugh.
Nothing was ever going to keep us back.
Yet now your gone, but hopefully only for a while.
Every second I wait for you is worth it because I know I'll pass this trial.
I'll wait in the back lying against the wall.
Just waiting for my heart to beat like a gong.
Until then
Time stretches on and on...
- Title: Time stretches on and on...
- Artist: KingBet
- Description: When I wrote this poem I intended for the flow to be slow. So when you read it try to pause at every break. If you do that I'm sure you'll get the full effect. Also I wrote this poem to be somewhere in a grey area between happiness and sadness. I hope you enjoy the poem, and please comment ^.^
- Date: 07/02/2010
- Tags: time stretches kingbet sadness happiness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- La Belle_ Sara - 07/25/2010
- wow thats deep i like it ^.^
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- Blah-Blah192 - 07/18/2010
- wow that's deep it's really good King smile
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- May 258 - 07/16/2010
- Very good. I think its a poem that could be put in the news papers if it could xD 5/5
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- submeth - 07/13/2010
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"I wanna break every clock, so the hands of time could never move again.."
ROFL made me think of Inevitable by Anberlin.
You're such a poet. /enviesss *_* - Report As Spam
- fancy-painted-boats- - 07/04/2010
- It's very good. 5/5
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- Lil Darker - 07/04/2010
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Omg king, that poem was both sad and beautiful. I and my special someone can relate to it a lot as well.
Rated 5, I'd rate to 100 if I could. ^^
Hope you make more, I'd like to read each one! -^o^- - Report As Spam
- Hold the Onions - 07/03/2010
- 5 biggrin
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