Illusion

• Artist: XxXBrennaxBearXxX
• Description: short poem i came up with in a couple of minutes
• Date: 09/30/2009
• Tags: illusion

Life is but an illusion
It makes you feel
It makes you beleve
To pass the time by

As soon as it starts it ends
in the blink of an eye
It all ends

Life is like a book
You have your ups and downs
But with it the end
The end is always
The end

Those who don't care
Have seen throu the
Illusion

But most people are happy
With their "life"
Unable to see the sad truth

That life is but an illusion
And that it has to end sometime!

Comments

[capaqua]

it's a free verse, doesn't have to rhyme, it sounds like a great poem

[Zurah]

This doesn't really seem like a poem.

[gossiper101xoxo]

that is so true !!!! inspiring !!!! smile

[To-Chi VIII]

Heheh... Hahaha!! Oh, sorry, laughing at Chocobo feather 16's comment... Heh... While I rather agree with the message of this poem, I believe the poen itself is not perfect. Good, but not great. Cool, but not grand slamming fliipity-gibbet awesometastic. You... Get the point.

[princess_chixscene96]

rlly awsome

[WeirdOutcast_108]

that's a great poem

[Dodokono]

i agree %100 sadly enough. Life is determined by those who view it, same with time, which means that both life and time are an illusion capable of being determined differently by anyone who cares enough to think about it. scratch that, by anyone at all.