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She is a porcelain doll,
Shattering to pieces
With every uttered syllable,
her faith in love decreases
With every single word
that tears another seam
in the stitches holding her together,
And tethering her dream
Of kisses, hugs, and warmth;
"One plus one" is through
With one tiny, simple sentence
That splits her heart in two.
And this little girl left broken
Is cold, harsh proof some words
are better left unspoken.
- by Julia Dream |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/29/2008 |
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- Title: I have no interest in you.
- Artist: Julia Dream
- Description: Words can be cruel.
- Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: have interest
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Comments (7 Comments)
- FormerlyKitaTataki - 12/09/2008
- Loved it. 5 and favorited
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- Julia Dream - 12/08/2008
- Fixed a line that I was unhappy with.
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- catty_girl_09 - 12/08/2008
- I like it, it's heartless and cold yet it seems like the narrator cares, in a very odd way, that he/she is breaking her heart. ^.^
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- fireshadowkatdemon - 12/08/2008
- Absolutely perfect. 5/5. Keep writing. ^ ^
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- Sir Skunkems - 12/08/2008
- Honestly, its good except for the cliched parts...and well also the fact that some of the rhymes looked and sounded kinda forced.
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- thebananacar - 12/08/2008
- Amazing
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- XxxMagical_GemeasideXxx - 12/08/2008
- that was sweet!^^
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