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Such loud silence do you not hear?
Such pain...such fear.
She has the bruses with the linin and lase.
Here she sits in a dark little place.
No one sees the obvious pain.
She sits with a mask in the rain.
Abused and broken this child how poor.
Daddy and mommy beat her sore.
It just got worse and worse.
This poor child what a curse.
Blood covers her page.
How could there be this much rage.
One night its to much to cope.
So the girl hangs her self with a jumprope.
So now she lies in the shade of a grave.
What was it she gave?
She gave us all the obvious but how......loud silence...so loud.
- by Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/30/2009 |
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- Title: loud silence
- Artist: Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX
- Description: lisening to conncret angel and thought this up
- Date: 01/30/2009
- Tags: loud silence
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Danika Miles - 08/12/2010
- Wow well written. So much of this I could visualize. Very well done. Good job keep it up!
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- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 07/08/2010
- lol thank you its an older one of my poems but thanx :]
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- MyKitKat18 - 07/08/2010
- Dude your poem gave me goosebumps no joke. :0 I liked it was good smile
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- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 07/17/2009
- ^^ ty
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- Daylight Towers - 07/16/2009
- magnifecenty great
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- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 04/19/2009
- no ^^ hun im not abused im just able to feel others pain and put in words
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- BnW x3 - 04/19/2009
- i liked how you expressed your feelings through this poem but i hope you won't do it. very possible for this is the mirror of yourself.
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