My angel, My child, My saint

• Artist: Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX
• Description: this is for people that have lost an un born child and also for a cosin of mine that has lost an unborn child. im also not here to win just to share poetry
  and keep in mind im 13 so it may not be that good. oh and the pic is of a saint childs sole well thats what im maken it anyway
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: mysaint

The child was born ....a rainy day. but this angel face made the clouds fade away. A smile caressing the world and heavens above... an angel with a face as lovly as a dove. Such a face that cause me so much pain.. as he didnt breathe a breath. my angel was floating to heaven never to wake. So i cryed my tears into the sadness lake. My baby boy such a saint that my one memorie of him is faint. He never lived though out of the womb no craddle instead a coffin. the doctor said it was to late and my angel floating to heaven was by fate. There they lay my angel to rest. My beautiful child i beleave its for the best. So now my angel is in gods hands because it was never ment to be my gabrel is now a faint memorie. Goodnight my angel ..my child ... my saint


By: Mist

Comments

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

lol i do thank you for that comment but to be truthful this is a very old poem like a year and a half lol

[sporosofyadah]

You're talented for your age. Keep practicing and you could be the next emily dickenson.

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

ty everyone i just like to write poems ^^

[scitama]

Awww...so well written, but such a sad theme. Good use of wording. And I was pelased at how it rhymed biggrin

[Starlight_Miss]

It's so sad crying . Loved it, though.

[randomexican]

wow. ur amazing. u should get this published.

[Oricalcon]

You need to give yourself more credit Mist, this is really good even if you don't think so.