Damaged

• Artist: Julia Dream
• Description: Some people say you're damaged...
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: damaged

Some people say you're damaged,
Broken, not all there.
Like bits and chips of shattered china,
But I can't say I care.

You might say I'm damaged,
Lost, and off the beaten path;
I feel that I am missing something,
And can never get it back.

But see our hands together!
Entwined and formed as one.
We're two silhouetted lovebirds,
Left to crash into the sun.

And we'll crash together,
If that means being free.
Sparks and flares and lightning bolts,
Together, you and me.

They say that we're both damaged,
Too shattered for each respective role,
So let's bring what's left of us together,
To make each other whole.

Comments

[beachballer3]

az uzual perfecto and I truly think that you should make a book of poems when you have enough and try it for a publishing. And then when you feel comfortable with your writing write a novel. No offense if you are comfortable with your writing.

[bindyblueeyes]

also i love this writing just as well as your others. it evokes emotion in your readers. and i have had a hard time finding another artist as good as you. you inspire me to write more. you are one of my muses. for i have a few

[bindyblueeyes]

wow that is beautiful. funnily enough my friends and i were talking really about how the human bodies seem to go together as a puzzle. and then in this you say "But see our hands together!
Entwined and formed as one." and also, "So let's bring what's left of us together,
To make each other whole." it reminds me of the conversation my friends and i had.

[nutty sports gal]

deep. omg i love all of ur work!!!!!!!!!!! write a book

[Anonymous...]

A wonderful poem, very poignant. The second verse was a bit odd; all the other verses have rhyming 2nd and 4th lines and the second one doesn't.
But other than that, this poem is great! biggrin

[BlackDream12]

That is so amazing, i love your writing!

[TerraHilde]

Deep, beautiful, and so true. i love it