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I closed my eyes concentrating using a lot of power and then gallifrey appeared in hollogram all around us, Martha looked at it and then said gob smacked "So this is Gallifrey it's so beatiful" I smiled at her and you just had to agree because it was beatiful and you could see everything going on there. The Doctor was not smiling at the time I could not understand why but then he said "Nobody should have this much power and this isn't supposed to happen, it's impossible. I added "OH COME ON!!!! It's not like I'm changing history or anything because this is just a view, it's not real, besides your the one who's guilty of changing history. If you go back and save people who were not meant to be alive, people who are at a fixed point in time, the whole of history could change and time could collapse and also the planet. The Doctor replied " What do you mean I'm guilty, I have never changed history" I said back " Yes you did and the whole of Earth could be in trouble because you went to Mars in 2059, I think it was that date, you saved people and brought them back to Earth where history is changing around us and because of that the master will live on, perhaps you don't know this because it's still in your future." The doctor replied" How can you know that!!??
I got bored listening to him so I said "Lets see Gallifrey a lot better" I buzzed my screwdriver and the whole of gallifrey appeared in virtual reality around us, it looked like we were standing in the skies of gallifrey, but really we were standing inside the Tardis. The Doctor said "Stop this now" I said "No way this is so beautiful and I'm enjoying it" The Doctor kept on and on at me so I buzzed my screw driver again, then the whole video/picture of gallifrey went away. I went over to the Tardis doors and opened them, then a huge flying creature that was 10 times the size of me bit me in the stomache. The Doctor grabbed me pulling me back and Martha shut the doors of the Tardis quickly. The Doctor layed me down on the floor and listened to my hearts with his stethoscope and one of my hearts had stopped, the other was racing. The Doctor said "This is not good we must help her now" The bite was a zig zag pattern that went through my top all the way through my flesh. My eyes turned grey and I had green and purple curve marks on my skin like a disease. Martha grabbed the oxygen mask and put it on my face. I lifted my arm in pain and grabbed the oxygen mask taking it off my face and then threw it. martha said "You need that" I said back to her " I don't need it, I don't want it, it's getting on my nerves!!!!" Martha wouldn't listen to me, she got the mask and put it on my face and held it down on me so I couldn't get it off. The Doctor started up the Tardis and landed it on the planet Esthanopa.
Esthanopa is the cure planet where the beings there work day and night and forever to find a cure for every planet and world, galaxy and universe. The Doctor stepped out of the Tardis carrying me with Martha following, he entered the building nearest to him which was green with a curved door. He walked up to the front desk where there was a creature standing behind it, which was green with a short body and a cylinder shape head. His eyes were where it's mouth was supposed to be, they were blue with a turquoise centre. His mouth was where his eyes were supposed to be and it was purple on the inside, he had eight eyes. There was a long thing hanging out of his head like a pole. The Doctor said to it "Ix ol tho enf reo nu ler ( we have a girl here who needs help right now). The creature said " Op bong ez fre jhi kol (we will have help with you in a moment)" The Doctor waited then the creature shouted " Gonth reto yona lew ded (we need some help out here)."
More creatures like the one behind the desk came out of the room behind us and took me from the Doctor, it took four of them to carry me. They took me into the room they had just come from and layed me on a blue curvy bed, it was very uncomfortable. One of them went and got a needle that was full of a brownish-black formula and then injected it in my arm. He said to The Doctor " unzo hem fre ioz lek doa vin ( this might take a while, we have given her treatment but it was a serious bite)." The Doctor said "somg oi (thank you)" Martha looked at me looking worried, The Doctor looked at me only looking a bit concerned. The Doctor and Martha left the room and then the building and stayed in the Tardis for a couple of hours, I was laying there and my bite wound healed itself. I got up and walked out of the hospital and to the Tardis. I opened the doors and said "I'm bored, I'm going to go and save a world or something. I asked The Doctor if I could have my gismo ship and he refused.
I shouted "GIVE ME MY GISMO SHIP" He kept on refusing saying " Your a Timelord and your my responsibility now" I shouted "THERE ARE UNIVERSES OUT THERE THAT NEED MY HELP AND I CAN SAVE THEM, I'M NOT YOUR RESPONSIBILITY!!!!" He replied in a trying to reassure voice "We are the only two left and there is none of us left in existence besides us two." I replied softly "There isn't only two of us left, there is three of us left, there is me, you, and Jenny. Jenny is still alive, and she is out there doing what I want to do, saving lives. The Doctor didn't say a word. I grabbed a little ship out of my pocket and made it bigger then jumped inside it, i buckled up my belt and pulled the roof down and then made the Tardis doors open. I flew out in my ship into the wide world. Martha asked The Doctor "What do we do now?" He replied "We follow her."
- Title: The mystery land adventure p 3
- Artist: Mew Vic
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The adventure where odd and unbeliveable come together to make the adventure even more exciting
- Date: 12/13/2009
- Tags: mysterylandadventure
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Comments (2 Comments)
- zaiabloom - 06/28/2010
- wow maybe i should post my story its pretty kool i guess? but im really bad at correcting my mistakes so i wouldnt think it would work
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- XxAngelic_Kitty_GurlxX - 12/14/2009
- i cannot wait for the part 4 of this to come out. i have an idea what the fourth part can be about. ast he doctor and martha are following you when you are in your ship. you go through space travel and help jenny defeat a black hole in the universe smile that would be soooooo cool wink
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