Shadowraidian

• Artist: Captain Nickolai
• Description: This is a brief description of what is in my book. Ill be getting it published soon. so look for it.
  The story line is about a teenage boy who finds out hes part of a clan of shadow wielders, The shadowraidians, People who can travel from shadow to shadow, and even use it as a weapon.
• Date: 10/20/2009
• Tags: shadowraidians

Shadowraidian- Epilogue :

We Were Sprinting through shadow to shadow, Traveling, Speeding Far far away from what we just witnessed. a bloody massacre of all of our friends, almost the whole clan had been eradicated, Only 7 of us left. Suddenly it happened. A shadowraidian burst through the shadow right in front of us, wielding a Dark dagger. Dark Steel, The weapon that can hurt us the most.
Under his helmet i could see who he was It was one of my old friends, The ones who attacked our clan, our home! He made a swipe for one of our party, Our friend dived into the nearest shadow, Where the foe followed, "NO!" I pleaded but kept running, as he pulled his palm out and made the shadow Erupt in blood, There wasn't any Form in that shadow. Our friend was lost. And we Were all That's left. 5 New shadowraidians and an Teenage boy. We were doomed.

Comments

[Night_of_the_Phoenix]

Oh my GODS!!! This is crazy!!! Amazing!!! though u have to watch for the capitalization and the full stops. so cool!! i soo wanna read it. ur sure ur gonna publish it? i cant wait!!

[sSs_Vampire_Prince_sSs]

good ^_^

[LadyCoventina]

There are just a few little things...just watch capitalization and between 'what we had just witnessed' and 'a bloody massacre' there could probably be a colon. But very well written otherwise!