Paranoia

• Artist: Ang3lic_D3m0n
• Description: I'm alive, I suppose so...
  Am I alive ? I suppose so...
  
  Paranoia I'm insane,
  Something is wrong in my brain,
  
  Can't you hear those sounds?
  Don't you see those clocks ?
  Why don't you believe me ?
  Look at me I'm flying no I'm not lying ...
  
  Don't you hear the rain ?
  It is drenching my pain,
  Until faint,
  Look there is some red paint !
  
  Look at me now, and please tell me, am I paranoid ?
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: paranoia

This is for a band I'm making with my friends. This is our first song. Well we are still working on it I'm just trying to find lyrics...

Comments

[Edell Frenetica]

score for originality, but the rhymes are so basic I could guess the final word of each sentance before getting to it.

[insert_name_here_3]

good luck with your band and good lyrics random "red paint!"
sorrowful yet joyful who cares where its posted some one else did the same thing. Your just different which this poem/lyric...I can't come up with a word I can spell (I feel so retared today)

[Adelxe]

Some people are so harsh on here! I like pick the right music for the lyrics though. ^^

[Agrikar the Hidden]

Uh... several 'rude' people have already said stuff, and they're correct, but I'll elaborate. You don't have rythm. Even if the words rhyme at the end they might not work well with eachother. You have to say something with your lyrics, and talking about paint just... kills it really. I liked the third and fourth lines the best, but even then...

[II Flower petals II]

I like it

[II Flower petals II]

I like it

[Reprogrammed]

I like it... lol "Look there is some red paint!" So random... XD
I love it. 5/5