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I always wanted more from you
than you were willing to give;
So now we've gone our separate ways
each with different lives to live.
The bond will always be there
the friendship always intact;
But the time for us has come and gone
and the pages of time, you can't turn back.
I will always be a friend to you
and wonder how you are;
The smiles and laughter I will remember
and our fights have become painless scars.
Sometimes on those busy days
when you've a thousand things to do;
Please let me glide slowly through your mind
and spend some time with you.
In that quiet moment
when you're surprised to find me there;
Just remember even with the distance between us
I am still someone who cares.
- by elflakoo155 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/20/2009 |
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- Title: quiet emotions
- Artist: elflakoo155
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- Date: 12/20/2009
- Tags: quiet emotions
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iiClassifiedd_Cookehzii - 04/08/2010
- that is so beautiful. you could be a good song writer some day.
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- CarefulSong - 04/03/2010
- Wow. 5/5
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- AliceMaliceOG - 04/01/2010
- This is good. it reminds me of mt ex friends and ex boyfriends...... 5/5
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- luvnikiniki - 03/28/2010
- i luv it, it also reminds me of my friend dennis but now i refuse to talk to him (hes a jack###)
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- xTweedlex - 03/23/2010
- thats so how i feel right now love it can't wait until the next one smile
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- beast alchemist - 03/13/2010
- depressing but good
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- nbetweener - 02/25/2010
- Wow. Excellent portrayal of the feeling. I liked the line about the painless scars, and the whole fourth stanza. Good flow and meter control. I could see another stanza about how the passion has cooled, but the care remains or something.
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