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No No No!give me a chance to live!
my friends have you ever seen a ghost?
have you ever seen a dead who come back to life?
and rise after death?
to walk and talk once more with the living?
do not be surprise,if I tell that I am a ghost,for I am a GHOST!
I died here with a presicution yet to come!
what you cannot understand what Im saying!
let me tell you the whole story...
I woke up one day saying"good morning mama!did you have a nice sleep?"
oh sure,is so watery
what?!,what is going on out there?!
it's... something cold and sharp!
it's hurting me mama.....it's killing me!
oh god pls help,pls........
until I suffer no more...
I can fell my body britually detached from each other!!!
I am dead
dead to the long to see my mother
dead to hear of the voice a wise father I am dead.
pls don't do this to my brothers and sisters.
you are well your nice
DO SOME ONE CARE!!!!!!
please do.. please... please......................
nice right wink hehhhehehh,go down!!!!!
(use only arrows down and up)
go on!!!!!!!
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start on one!
1.are you sure your going to do it?go to 4
2.WTF!!!!,IM NEROUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!go to 3
3.MAMAMIYA!HELP ME!go to 10
4.oh my..I think your not going to do it!!!!!go to 2
5.PLEASE RATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!heheheheh people: gonk stressed scream 4laugh
6.okay,I AM GOING TO TELL IT NOW.............go to 5
7.okay almost for the saying thing!go to 8
8.now its coming....go to 9
9.is coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go to 6
10.im not joking pls do it!go to 7
go on now rate now!!!!!!!!!!
- by Xxemo_princess20xX |
- High School Flashback
- | Submitted on 04/17/2009 |
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- Title: fetus cry
- Artist: Xxemo_princess20xX
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Description:
im glad that I made this POEM!!!!heheheh
- Date: 04/17/2009
- Tags: little girl
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Comments (6 Comments)
- lovely781 - 03/30/2011
- i think it's wonderful XD when i scrolled down 2 the end & read it,i just thought "LOL"
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- Xarcak - 08/06/2010
- ._.'' It was nice, but it needs re-done to look better ^-^ .. Just how it's written.
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- Captain Pardalis - 06/17/2010
- Grammatical errors make it bawful
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- AnimaRisi - 05/19/2009
- lol love it
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- gabby82 - 04/18/2009
- i don't get it i mean how it is a poem? pls comment me back.
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- Jennette Bag Head - 04/17/2009
- WHAT? D8
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