• once upon a time there was 2 kids named jimmy and cindy and they had a mom named kirra.one day they moved to a house that had a pretty lil lake bye it. but cindy new there was something strange about it.so one cold night on a blustery day. cindy looked out her window and saw somthing come out the lake she "gasps" as she saw it . then she saw it went behind the house. so cindy ran in her bed and hided under her covers then she herd a thump. and "moans" so she ran out her door and saw . a sort of dead person with black pure eyes. and rip close and shoes. so then she backed away as the thing came closer to her.she "gasped" and "screamed" and her mom came running in the house and she said whats wrong sweet heart'. and cindy sadi nothing mom just a night mare is all im really im fine. so then the mom said ok and "kissed" her daughter cheek and said goodnight sweet heart and closed her door. then al of a sudden she herd a scream in fear and then cindy hoped out her bed and ran to see what it was. she checked her moms room and her brothers room and guest what she saw. she"gasped " as she saw her brother and her mother had dissaperd . so she took off her pjs and put on some blue jeans and a red wool top. then she ran out her door . into the kitchen out the back door.and she ran and ran. till she saw the police station. and she ran in there and said OH DEAR GOD HELP ME PLZ. and the police said what can i do for u lil one. and she said follow me plz hurry. and so the police got in the car and drove to her house. and then she took them to the empty rooms that use to be filled with her mom and her brother. and so the police said were r ur parents . and she sadi the lady in the lake she she took them. and the officer laught. lady in the lake com on now lol.and she said well where else can they be huh? she said angrily.idk at the store. and the police said ill go in the lake and see so he dived in to lake and. then he said i found them then they called the abalance . and then the mom and her brother had to be in the hospital for to mouths and when they were out they packed there stuff quitly and drove off from that house.and then the woman in the lake will always follow them cuz she wants to kill them.

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