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- | Submitted on 03/01/2014 |
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- Title: Starry Night
- Artist: xxunforgivenmoonxx
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Description:
The town does not exist
except where one black-haired tree slips
up like a drowned woman into the hot sky.
The town is silent. The night boils with eleven stars.
Oh starry starry night - Date: 03/01/2014
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Black Dawn Rose - 03/07/2014
- This... I'm sorry but it's just not working. Using set items for accessories and eyes (maybe arm poses) is ok, but your dress and head piece are the same item which takes away creative points. Anyone can match predetermined sets.. The gold in the hair clashes with the blue-silver-white hues and the blush seems out of place. All in all, you have a relatively good idea. But the execution could have been better. 1/5
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- Tortillass - 03/04/2014
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Wow actually, just noticed that the headpiece and skirt come from the same item. lol
The set usage isn't working with this. - Report As Spam
- Tortillass - 03/04/2014
- I like the headpiece with the skirt, but everything else seems really messy. The blush on the face makes no sense with the avatar and the description, and it's just not very cohesive. You might want to consider citing the person that wrote that excerpt from the poem you used as well.
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