- by Lyonel Noale |
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- | Submitted on 02/10/2014 |
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- Title: The Calm
- Artist: Lyonel Noale
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Description:
The Calm - a poem
As the thunder echoes on a distant plain
And the waters roll with their sapphire waves
Down and under goes the churning flow
Hiding the depths and the deaths below.
Clouds break open and the cracks spill light
Sailors, take warning-! Though perhaps, not tonight.
For in this moment, as the Calm remains
The sea is no monster; it is only rain. - Date: 02/10/2014
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Ziirroh - 02/23/2014
- Was not expecting to see this, I'm pleasantly surprised. I hope you get in the top ten with this, It's gorgeous. And that description is lovely as well.
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- Lyonel Noale - 02/21/2014
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Ahh! Thank you for all of the wonderful comments! *bows humbly* I'm really flattered, and glad that you like it! 3nodding
Thank you so much for your feedback! - Report As Spam
- Fainauriel - 02/20/2014
- This, plus the description, is a work of art.
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- xxunforgivenmoonxx - 02/20/2014
- so beautiful. I love the description of it. I agree with @Shadow checking out the writing section as well.
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- -Fizztastic Rain- - 02/19/2014
- This is beautiful ^^ 5*
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- Shadow J Dark - 02/18/2014
- Its a neat idea, but maybe you should check out the writings section, I think it'd be more your thing.
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