- Title: A Magical Land....Continued
- Artist: typhorium
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Description:
So, the pirate left, and told his friend about the magical land. His friend was very interested in the land, and set sail to go there! "Ahoy!" He finally reached there! He felt like an angel. Anyway,this time there was a Green Bunny called a Grunny. It gave him a lunchbox. He enjoyed his stay and his food.
The End
Please give Comments!!! - Date: 12/04/2011
- Tags: magical land continued
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Vampire Legend Aki - 12/10/2011
- ehh... it kinda looks like you just threw a bunch of items together and didn't really think it out. i love the description and the title, but the stuff with the avi don't seem to fit well together.. 1/5
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- Ghostface Dman - 12/09/2011
- cool avi
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- typhorium - 12/06/2011
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@ cherryx9: pls see my " A Magical Land entry first the animals are from there
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- sunflower-kicks - 12/06/2011
- the story is okay but this isn't writing arena, so don't worry about it too much. however slippers(just in general) don't go to well with the avi, and the other animals look pretty random and don't fit (except for maybe the grunny).
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- S0 weird - 12/06/2011
- very even tho its very exotic
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- typhorium - 12/05/2011
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Do you think the story describes the avatar well?
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