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- | Submitted on 11/14/2010 |
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- Title: Curfew
- Artist: Kuroi Suishou
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Description:
They told me not to come here
Not to come here after dark
But who am I to listen?
This little ragged meadow lark
This place holds much appeal
Such arousal that I feel
The sky of purple, hills of blue
Pathways black with pinkish hue
There's no telling what they'd do
If they only knew...
That I have broken
Curfew
- Date: 11/14/2010
- Tags: curfew original poem purple black
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kuroi Suishou - 11/20/2010
- Thanks to everyone who supported this submission, for a wonderful week! Here's hoping next week will be even better! Stay awesome, Gaia!~ heart
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- Happy_Rain_Cloud - 11/20/2010
- I luuuuv it 5/5 submit the poem into the writing thing a ma bober :3
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- Kuroi Suishou - 11/19/2010
- Heh. Thanks, all! sweatdrop
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- Rose-colored-death - 11/19/2010
- Wow thats a great poem you should submit that into the wrighting thing...lol not sure what to call it ^_^''' 5/5
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- flureete - 11/18/2010
- love it 5/5 biggrin
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- Lady FOS - 11/17/2010
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I loved the poem and the color scheme of your entry matches quite fine. 5/5
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- Tiny Stone Coatl - 11/16/2010
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wonderful poem and neat avi smile
check out my gallery I have an entry that has a dark theme like this kind of but its a different story/poem, open for voting on monday.
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