- by Anhelitta De Celine-Val |
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- | Submitted on 11/07/2010 |
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- Title: Tattered Lace
- Artist: Anhelitta De Celine-Val
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Description:
From the shadows,
appears a face,
concealed in,
tattered lace.
Clumsy, awkward,
no signs of grace,
she wanders around,
in tattered lace.
Passing a mirror,
she sees her disgrace,
no longer beautiful,
only tattered lace.
Weeping over memories,
moving at a slow pace,
remembering a time,
a time without tattered lace. - Date: 11/07/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Arii Heart - 11/14/2010
- p.s. rate mine? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102379735#title
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- chasevk - 11/14/2010
- pretty good, the items come together, but it is a little confusing. Nice poem. 4/5
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- Anhelitta De Celine-Val - 11/14/2010
- Sadly not going to happen...would be nice to win in the original arena but this entry is not going to be the one to do it.
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- Arii Heart - 11/14/2010
- 5/5 love the poem and the design, the colors are awesome!
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- Aeriosuo - 11/14/2010
- Oh and btw, you better place! >:U
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- Aeriosuo - 11/14/2010
- Love how you make two colors that normal don't match with each other look good. 5/5
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- Radiocake - 11/14/2010
- i like the teal details you put to her with so many caution,hope you win a place hun C:
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