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- Title: Kizuki
- Artist: Sargent_Ookami
- Description: Kizuki is a very powerful phycic who posses the power to not only see ghosts and hear them but to also excersise them even if they are way to powerful to doso alone
- Date: 07/20/2010
- Tags: kizuki
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- The Lord Valkyrie - 07/29/2010
- like Belladonna previously stated, you have a good concept but needs a lot of work. Add those ghosts like Belladonna suggested, and maybe make her look more "dark", her current color choices don't seem to go anywhere. 3/5.
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- cutekitten_o3o - 07/29/2010
- practical...i like it ^^ it needs a little more work i give it a 3/5
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- Moth Tale - 07/27/2010
- There's potential here but this needs much more work. Try adding in some ghosts, like the ghost children from the Nightmare, or using a shadow from Shadowplay. Maybe give her some ghosthunting gear if you can.
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- Ave Machina - 07/26/2010
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Be sure not to confuse exercise with exorcise. XD
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