- Title: The Lonely Count
- Artist: Kaichaiu
- Description: He stood, with a white rose, mourning. As his memory brings back the day his carriage was raided by bandits. Fighting them off as he could, a blade caught his face, as it went across his eye, taking it out, bringing him to the ground. The scream of his wife's voice, forced him to peer in horror as a blade pierced her chest. Now, he stands at the site of his wife's murder as he closes is eye, placing the rose where she died. Whispering to himself. "I will never forget you."
- Date: 04/19/2009
- Tags: lonely count
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Tyxa - 04/26/2009
-
I LUFFS
5/5
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- asmindys - 04/24/2009
- Awwww!
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- Hapurpan - 04/23/2009
- The story's plot line isn't exactly typical, but it could be written a bit better no? Then again that's not the main goal here is it?! Okay... sorry I'm a little spaztic at the moment. Too much coffee.... Back to the avatar. From the story to the avatar I definitely see the melancholy within, even possibly aging which is hard to do for an avatar. The symbolism of the white rose could be better defined but then again there is a subtlety to not knowing. 5/5
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- SeraphicAssassin - 04/22/2009
- i like it...
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- Blinx Rose - 04/21/2009
- ^^ i like
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