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  • Title: Cracked Porcelain
  • Artist: Adoracia
  • Description: The doll lies still and broken
    Whitewashed curls dusty
    As if brushed by moonbeams
    Eyes so dark glistening
    Like beetles in the night
    A tattered dress clinging
    Like shadows and bats
    Drinking from the cracks
    In porcelain skin
    A toy left forgotten
    Abandoned like so many
    Shattered dreams

    The poem is called 'Blank Verse' which is why there's no rhyming.
    I know that some people look for sets and rate based on that. So to defend myself, this is not a set, although there are some items that are similar.
  • Date: 08/18/2009
  • Tags: broken doll
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • The Rose Contessa - 08/27/2009
  • This avatar is creepy and disturbing... in the good way though. This is a very solid avatar, but something still seems off about it to me that I can't put my finger on, so it'll be a 4/5 for you. And keep up with the poetry, will you?
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