- Title: Cracked Porcelain
- Artist: Adoracia
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Description:
The doll lies still and broken
Whitewashed curls dusty
As if brushed by moonbeams
Eyes so dark glistening
Like beetles in the night
A tattered dress clinging
Like shadows and bats
Drinking from the cracks
In porcelain skin
A toy left forgotten
Abandoned like so many
Shattered dreams
The poem is called 'Blank Verse' which is why there's no rhyming.
I know that some people look for sets and rate based on that. So to defend myself, this is not a set, although there are some items that are similar. - Date: 08/18/2009
- Tags: broken doll
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The Rose Contessa - 08/27/2009
- This avatar is creepy and disturbing... in the good way though. This is a very solid avatar, but something still seems off about it to me that I can't put my finger on, so it'll be a 4/5 for you. And keep up with the poetry, will you?
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- Queen Vampirate - 08/25/2009
- totally awesome. great description! 5/5
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- That Little Yuuki Cross - 08/25/2009
- i love the avi!!!!
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- AMentallyChallengedMuffin - 08/25/2009
- haha ur lucky that I like black ^-^ 5/5
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- Meavera - 08/25/2009
- It all works very well together. Nice job.
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- DisturbThePeace - 08/25/2009
- that is cool biggrin
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- squeeky mouse - 08/25/2009
- Good luck sweetie, you should win this!!
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