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- | Submitted on 02/24/2008 |
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- Title: Father Wyvern
- Artist: APainSoDeepItBellows
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Description:
A story has been told
About a man named- Father Wyvern.
It is said he passed- long ago,
But then this story wouldn't be true.
He sees the sins you have done,
He makes you a- bargain.
"Repent or die," says he
His eye examines you up and down.
"For you shall pay, with the high moon,"
snickers he, like a hyena finding food.
You ignore his suggestions
He smiles as you leave
"You'll be back, a week from tomorrow's eve!"
He calls as- you walk out the door.
To himself he says
"After you - Date: 02/24/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- On-Dray-Uh Monique - 02/18/2008
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I love it!!! And obviously the poem matches!!! I
hope you win!!! - Report As Spam
- Chocobocafe - 02/18/2008
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Interesting story. Kind of plays off of Poe's
[i:995fe28b09]Raven[/i:995fe28b09] a bit, but interesting
nonetheless.
Interesting avatar design, as
well. Good use of the background item. - Report As Spam
- TaliusMuriel - 02/18/2008
- the gold in there doesn't match at all ^^;
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- tooticky - 02/18/2008
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Wonderful, dark poem. 10'd. :3
Although, may I
suggest changing the hair to a silver or grey? The
bright blue doesn't match *imho* - Report As Spam
- Giannia - 02/18/2008
- That's one great description. Ohh, he is spooky!
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- The Dragon Lady Of CDEHS - 02/18/2008
- Thats a pretty cool avatar
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- ShinigamiQ - 02/18/2008
- nice avatar, love the story its like poetry
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